First draft feedback

      In the first place, some feed backs said I have to increase my volume. Because many people in the back row can't heard my voice. Although the character Laura is shy in the play, I should speak out loudly and clearly. In order to let all the audience heard each word.
      In the play I have to focus on my character, In the first draft of the play I didn't focus on acting Laura. When Amanda said:" Oh, Laura do not play that Victrola," I should play that Victrola. But in the play I just sit on the chair and staring at Amanda. This shows I didn't really understand what should I do during particular parts.
      I should add more body language and emotion into the character. Laura has less sentences than Amanda and Tom. In order to let the audience know your feeling and mentality, I have to add more facial expression and body language to delicate the character, to make the character more vivid. During the play I just sit on the chair and have a normal conversation with Amanda. I didn't add emotion in to Laura. The audience can't realize that I'm angry. I can yell a lot to show my anger. I can also slam my fist on the table, kick the chair to make some noise.
     During the play I have to focus. Because when I was acting I laughed. I should be serious, I think I laugh is because I did't memorized the sentences well. I don't know what should I do then I will laugh. I should also make a connection between scene one and scene two. during the play after I finished acting scene one I just stand in the dark. I don't know where should I go. When I have to say my sentence in scene two I just walk in irrelevantly. I have to talk to my teammates, I can stay in the dark until I have to say my sentence.