Haiku poem

1. Original version and Stella's version
we clap in our class
The clap rhythm(sound) just like a(is louder than) rap
It’s not like a snap (easy stuff)

2. Original version
Clapping hands is hard
It’s not like look at a map
Finally finished

3. Revise
Clap, not always fun
Map, a very helpful tool
Choose one you like best


4. From Yun
Clap next to a trap
taking a nap on the lap
slap him with the strap


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